Monday, 14 October 2013

Second Draft - NaNoWriMo - added text and corrections


Preface

Dreams are funny things. Before the Awakening mine had never been that vivid. I would wake up the next morning and immediately forget whatever obscure events I had experienced the night before. It would only be later on in the day when something would occasionally trigger my memory and I would have some vague recollection of some odd, blurry adventure that I had embarked on in my sleep.

But when you begin to have the same dream almost every night for two years it starts to become more vivid, more memorable; almost part of your existence.

This has been the case for me ever since the Awakening. Every night I dream the same dream. The Predators fill my head, their familiar groans penetrating my thoughts, their stench consuming my senses. It’s as if they are trying to eat away at my sanity as well as my flesh.

In my dream, I am always sat on the swing in our old back garden, watching the clouds peacefully float by, listening to the birds or taking part in some other sort of dream-like activity.

Then, I am alerted by distant moans and I look up to see a collection of stumbling Predators emerge from the house, their arms outstretched in desperation, longing for human prey. Panic bubbles up inside me but, as is traditional in dreams, I am stationary; the bench restricting any chance of my escape as I sit there struggling to move in my frozen state.

Suddenly, in the corner of my eye, I see another figure by the house. Craning my neck, I try to see who it is through the mass of moving corpses.

It’s a little girl.

Her face is a blur - it is often impossible to see who people are, since you are often provided with limited sight in dreams. Despite my inability to identify her, feelings of dread surge through my body as Predators surround the little girl. I scream at her to run but no sound emerges from my mouth, whether it’s because I am in a dream or because my voice is being drowned out by the sickening dim of hungry Predators, I don’t know.

Yet, the Predators seem to ignore her. They lamely push past her body and seem to only focus on the need for my flesh, not hers

The little girl smiles; her face full of joy and innocence while I know mine shows an expression of panic and despair. She looks angelic in a floral white dress and sparkling patent leather shoes.

Her innocent face breaks my heart and it is her innocent face that is the last thing I see before I am engulfed by the mass of ravenous Predators.

***

 ‘Ellie! Ellie! Wake up, Ellie!’

I sit bolt upright. My throat feels raw as if I have been screaming continuously, my limbs ache a little from possible thrashing and I can feel hot beads of sweat lingering on my burning forehead. Looking around, I see the faint outline of Katie’s figure scurrying around my bead recovering the bed covers that have been strewn around me.

‘You were yelling,’ she informs me, ‘was it the Predators again?’ I nod apprehensively; I hate the idea of my eleven year-old sister, who I am supposed to be responsible for, having to often witness me in this distressed state.

After a couple of minutes I compose myself and journey to the bathroom to splash some much-needed cold water on my face. Katie follows me.

‘Are you okay?’ she asks, an uneasy tone to her voice. I cup a trembling hand to her worried face.

‘I’m fine,’ I reply, with as much positivity as I can muster. ‘It’s okay; you can go back to bed now. I’m alright.’

But I don’t feel it. It’s as if I can still feel their decaying fingers digging into my skin, I can still sense their revolting stench lingering in my nostrils and as I pat my face dry and look up into the mirror above the sink, I can’t help but picture the rotting face of a Predator instead of my own.

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